tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8148285353078156949.post2156533098020606354..comments2023-10-01T06:23:50.251-07:00Comments on Oh ya, huh: StuffJosh Burchhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17829354467625755465noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8148285353078156949.post-89648408472597645262007-10-11T08:55:00.000-07:002007-10-11T08:55:00.000-07:00Thanks for the feedback Andrew. I think you really...Thanks for the feedback Andrew. I think you really hit the nail on the head as far as where I need to go from here. Next time I do something like this I'm really gunna try to be more conservative with my lines, and I think planning it out a little in pencil first might be a good way to do that.Josh Burchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17829354467625755465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8148285353078156949.post-18381672052582948862007-10-11T01:44:00.000-07:002007-10-11T01:44:00.000-07:00Yo man. Finally an UPDATE!These are fun energetic...Yo man. Finally an UPDATE!<BR/><BR/>These are fun energetic pieces. But the one problem that I can see is in your drawing. I know that your trying to go for that immediate, spontanious quality but the drawings seem to be rushed and a little sloppy. When you start these maybe do a real quick pencil drawing just to figure out where things are. Then sit down and take your time on the ink drawing. Really analyze what your drawing. Try not to search for a line by going back over a line already laid down. Remeber spontanaity isn't just in how fast you do it but how you lay the line down and make your decisions.Andrew R. Wrighthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00427544981630333054noreply@blogger.com